Just Look at You

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Not-so-happy Poems

Just look at you, standing there, staring at me

It's no wonder you don't think you're pretty

With those permanent dark circles under your eyes

Eyes that never stay one colour long enough to be considered pretty

Look at those faded freckles of yours-

They could almost be cute, if they were there in full force

But as it is, they're just in the background, mottled

And then your hair, a permanently frizzy mess

Yes, put it into braids, contain it

So everyone else doesn't have to look at it

There are days when I can't stand to look at you

But even when I don't look, you're still there...

Like now.  You're still here

Though I found a way that I don't have to see you -

I've turned away from the mirror

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Strange how getting up for a drink of water in the middle of the night and catching a glimpse of yourself in the mirror can be inspirational.

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My friend, Jennifer,
How can she not see?
The light that shines from her
E'en as a beacon on a dark night?

Does she not see, as we do,
that she IS pretty?

Does she not view, as we do,
the power of the intellect?

Does she not know, as we do,
how strong she is?

Does she not ken, as we do,
the beauty of her soul?

Does she not realize, as we do,
the value of a loyal friend?

Jennie, my friend of ten years,
don't court the black pit of despair
until you've seen what we have;
the wonderful person
who is you.

Sincerely,
Amanda