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falling back on our wisdom

questioning our way through life

each day falling past the first

never looking past the tunnel of our lives

running from the concequences

confident to face our days

we keep walking this line



one day something happens

something comes along

left with so many questions

pushed outside safty

into the haze of vulnerability



it seems ok

untill that night

the night where a false truth become reality



all things have never been the same

i miss you so

i herd thouse words

scared you would say

when i needed you the most

you said thouse words



i hate you with more then a passion

but i love u just the same



i say goodbye far from this tunnel

say goodbye to everything we had

im starting a new parth

i take from you everything you gave me

all ill rember is thouse eyes that could make the whole world cry

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i love you........

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An old Friend... An old Friend...'s picture

absolutly beautiful, im speechless, this peice is so deep, everyone is left at some point in their lives and for you to just learn and build from that is incredible.
-An Old Friend

Molly K.'s picture

these eyes are grey matter with the clear blue of the heavens, they can indeed make the world cry and bare my soul to those who are unknowing. they lack twinkle, spark, and there's an absence of happiness with each blink. words are said becasue of what i can't seem to set in line, things that come so simple to others, seem to be something i'll never own up to. confusion runs my life as does fear. with each day i say something i never thought i would to who i never knew i would say it to. life takes you where you never wanted to go, doing, thinking and saying things that arn't in the plan. but there's where the problems comes in, there is no plan, no rewind button, life is as it is lived, as hard as that gulp is to swallow i must face and accept what i've said and haven't said, and mostly you must accept that. i read this piece thinking one thing, i know what inspired it, saddend by the words i know i said to you when they weren't exacty what i wanted to get across, but in times where you feel as if running out on people is the only escape , you do this just to survive to feel as though something might come out good.this piece has bared emotion but lacks the passion i know is behind it. try to sit and visualize before you write, image situations in full then write not what you think will sound best, but don't think, just write what you are seeing.