These thoughts in my head
everday wishing i was dead
trying to live the best i can
slowly demolishing my brain
driveing me insane
i cant take this
im loseing controle
my mind is on a one way train
driveing strait into the gates of hell
never turning back
but never running away
this is the pain you never forget
listen to these words
i live these words
loseing controle
slipping away fast
what am i saposed to think of all this
this is my own bloodshed
you people dont understand
what it means to me
all thats been said
all that will be said
my mind is on a one way train
driveing strait into the gates of hell
never turning back
but never running away
this is the pain you never forget
listen to these words
i live these words
how many more lines must be said
will anyone grasp my concepts in my head
or am i liveing my life alone
because how many more times must
this pain come back
life has put me down
my life has been thrown away
my mind is on a one way train
driveing strait into the gates of hell
never turning back
but never running away
this is the pain you never forget
listen to these words
i live these words
u changed ur name???ooookkk lol, i love you phil(will???), this iz an awesome poem, this iz the style that i REALY like, it rhymz!!! lol, i love you phil(will???), this train that ur rideing...GET OFF IT DAMNIT!!! :P, i love you, so so, so, so, so ,so so, so so, so, much, well be together forever, *muwah* and ur stuck with me forever hahahhahahahha, im sorry, (lol) :P i love you, bye babez talk to u lata love alwayz ~*~ Amy Thorp~*~
i like this one, i'm on the train to hell. but you're not so don't even say you are.**sticks out tounge at phil** lol. so hah. anyways. keep writing.
wow...this isn't like your normal writing style phil...i like it though....i kno where you are comming from...i'm comming from the same area...just remember i'm always here for you...are you always there for me?
-LauraT