train to hell

These thoughts in my head

everday wishing i was dead

trying to live the best i can

slowly demolishing my brain

driveing me insane

i cant take this

im loseing controle



my mind is on a one way train

driveing strait into the gates of hell

never turning back

but never running away

this is the pain you never forget

listen to these words

i live these words



loseing controle

slipping away fast

what am i saposed to think of all this

this is my own bloodshed

you people dont understand

what it means to me

all thats been said

all that will be said





my mind is on a one way train

driveing strait into the gates of hell

never turning back

but never running away

this is the pain you never forget

listen to these words

i live these words



how many more lines must be said

will anyone grasp my concepts in my head

or am i liveing my life alone

because how many more times must

this pain come back

life has put me down

my life has been thrown away



my mind is on a one way train

driveing strait into the gates of hell

never turning back

but never running away

this is the pain you never forget

listen to these words

i live these words

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Alexis Hunter's picture

u changed ur name???ooookkk lol, i love you phil(will???), this iz an awesome poem, this iz the style that i REALY like, it rhymz!!! lol, i love you phil(will???), this train that ur rideing...GET OFF IT DAMNIT!!! :P, i love you, so so, so, so, so ,so so, so so, so, much, well be together forever, *muwah* and ur stuck with me forever hahahhahahahha, im sorry, (lol) :P i love you, bye babez talk to u lata love alwayz ~*~ Amy Thorp~*~

Molly K.'s picture

i like this one, i'm on the train to hell. but you're not so don't even say you are.**sticks out tounge at phil** lol. so hah. anyways. keep writing.

Laura T's picture

wow...this isn't like your normal writing style phil...i like it though....i kno where you are comming from...i'm comming from the same area...just remember i'm always here for you...are you always there for me?
-LauraT