this world seems dead
as i crawl out from this abyess of lonlyness
and there shines a light
and angel from heaven
something more then theres ever been
these are the moments in life
which i hold on for
hang on to me
never let go
ill always love you
as the days grow old
this is the thing i want you to remeber
when i say i love you it is true
im liveing a life i never thought
im lost in the smiles
lost in the life that i so dearly hate
why did you show up in my life
i dont know how to thank you
all i can say is i love you
hang on to me
never let go
ill always love you
as the days grow old
this is the thing i want you to remeber
when i say i love you it is true
for all the tears ive shed
youve made every moment worth it
you saved me more then you will ever know
i dont know if i can ever repay you
but i can try every day
every moment i have
hang on to me
never let go
ill always love you
as the days grow old
this is the thing i want you to remeber
when i say i love you it is true
solo
Nobody understands love," the writer admits. "It seems to be Universal. Timeless. Yet, it's also very individual, filtered by our own lives and expectations. I don't understand love, and can't understand love, because it's a different thing for each of us.
-An Old Friend
hey i love this poem well written...this is the one change i would make
"hang on to me
never let go
ill always love you
as the days grow old
this is the thing i want you to remeber
when i say i love you it is true"
instead of the last line saying "when i say i love you it is true" maybe "when i say i love you its forever"...yes thats my style of poetry but its up to you :)
-LauraT