"a fallen rose"

I sit and float in the words You said,

I wonder how, could our love end!

i think of how you made me yours,

and suddenly you left me, like a fallin rose

i couldnt let go, i couldnt ignore

how i love you so, more than before

but you have left me, like a broken stone

breaking to pieces with every dawn

you simply hurt me with your words

and then you killed my inner grace

you made my life, useless and sad

since you have left me, with the memories i had

how could u leave, and just move on?

how could you breath without me hun.?

you said you dont even think of me

and i wonder how my reaction should be

and still i tried to win you back

yet still you left me alone in the dark

i showed i love you, and i always will

i never hurt you, yet you hurt me still

oh my love, oh my my...

you dont care, for me,,

just tell me why?!?!

we were a husband and a wife

now you seem to be out of my life!

does it comfort you to see me bleed?

is it your pleasure to kill my need?

yes i still love you, but lost the hope

and i promise without you, I'LL LEARN TO COPE...



19/march/2008

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Afzal Shauq's picture

good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?