i said:
"i will never fall in love"
but i betrayed my self,
and in love i fell!
now i know i'm falling apart!
i thought:
"it wont be wrong"
its worth the risk,
but with a simple word,
you broke my heart!!!
am i broken?
is it why i no longer feel?
my heart is no longer beatin'
the wound in me, i couldnt heal!
since he had spoken,
the heart of mine i couldnr seal!
he filled me with pain,
undescribably empty
nothing's left for me to feel,
other than feeling guilty!
i feel like,
i no more exist
like i'm not real,
i thought
its for the best
but it simply's not,
cause i CANT just heal!
nov-05
intersting... really your poetry shows me that you are a good and realistic and logic based poet... and the ideas and subjects are enough new and the way you do it is fantastic... yeah I mean it and love this piece of poem very much..and hope my poetry will also touch your heart if go through seriously..and let me know if its ok to your taste of soul...