"Hazel Eyes!"

under my shower;

so covered with vapor;



i see my self,

sitting on the shelf!



thinking..

to my slef i was talking!

linking~

the view i'v seen..



watching diamond eyes inside a shell,

seems for a while as watching an opal!

i thought it was a dream!



when i began to remember the way his hazel eyes made me feel;

at the moment to me he started to gaze!



that dreamy look;

showed me love; my heart got blazed!

to my heart it brought a shock!

my self it madly amazed!



at that moment, thoughts were flowing to my head!

i became flushed enough, so i turned my eyes to the space!



i realized;

in the vapor i was lost!

wind started blowing;

i felt cold;

at the moment thoughts were mixing...

everything was soft!

i knew in love i'll never fall,

but those eyes i couldnt ignore!

they made me feel as never before!



i endlessly want to stay,

though i know for a fact i'm so afraid!

i know i might do the right,

and let my heart~

fade away!



THE END!!!!!

29/04/2004

10:44:40pm

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It did happen!~ but i was afraid... i'm glad i ignored, we are still good friends:)

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Chelsea N.'s picture

Wow, its awesmoe that your still friends!!! I hope that I remain friends wit the guy I'm going through a tough time with. H'es got steel blue/grey eyes....they're awesome!
Well written, I definately had to sigh at the ending.
~Chelsea

sultan's picture

مرحبا ماري...انا هسا بدي اقرأك الشعر المزبوط

بعد التفكير والايقان
قررت اني اكتب لماري الان
لاني بتابع اخبارها من زمان
وموقعها اللي كان
صفحة انا فيها ولهان
فاسمحيلي اني احكي اللي جوا قلبي
والا انا رايح اصير عيان
لاني انا معجب فيكي وبخفة دمك
اللي هي زي الرمان
انا بدي اعرفك على حالي
انا سلطان the sweet man
معجب فيكي وباشعارك وبكتاباتك كمان
وانا هسا بدي اروح لانه عندي امتحان الآن
فعشان هيك ادعيلي حتى ما ارسب واحمل المادة كمان
وهسا اسمحيلي اودعك واقلك باي يا ملكة الجنان

sultan's picture

مرحبا ماري...انا هسا بدي اقرأك الشعر المزبوط

بعد التفكير والايقان
قررت اني اكتب لماري الان
لاني بتابع اخبارها من زمان
وموقعها اللي كان
صفحة انا فيها ولهان
فاسمحيلي اني احكي اللي جوا قلبي
والا انا رايح اصير عيان
لاني انا معجب فيكي وبخفة دمك
اللي هي زي الرمان
انا بدي اعرفك على حالي
انا سلطان the sweet man
معجب فيكي وباشعارك وبكتاباتك كمان
وانا هسا بدي اروح لانه عندي امتحان الآن
فعشان هيك ادعيلي حتى ما ارسب واحمل المادة كمان
وهسا اسمحيلي اودعك واقلك باي يا ملكة الجنان

Kris Grula's picture

exquisitely done. this was beautiful, with a vast sigh upon reading the conclusion. this holds a real quality with me. great work.