"a withering devotion"

on my bed, lying down,

i've been here for so long,

semiconscious~ eyes wide open,

gazing to the sealing,

feeling terribly down!



unsecure, stressed!

confused, unsure,

somehow obsessed!

losing control,

stupid decisions,

wondering,

am i alive or am i dead?

m lost in time,

n strongly depressed!



dying without feelings

its just hate what i;m feeling,

its dispare



desperate,

desolated,

from my world,

i'm isolated!



i'm dying

i'm burning

my heart is stump

my entire life is simply

B    R    E    A    K    I    N    G    !



insomnia,

lost into time,

as to that sealing,

i'm still gazing!

through the night,

my memories are blazing,

as i'm losing the right,

in "a happy living!"



lost emotions,

silent, free of motion,

sharp and focused,

its a withering devotion!



i'm dying

i'm burning

my heart is stump

my entire life is simply

B    R    E    A    K    I    N    G    !

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Afzal Shauq's picture

dying without feelings
its just hate what i;m feeling,
its dispare

sweet verses and seem to me that you write from deep inside and the reality is your mottoo and the plea you express is good in this poems..like above lines..good work .. my few poems have translted into arabic too and found in net you can search if google me