"a shadow through the light!"

there's loads of words,

by me never been used,

loads of feelings,

i started to lose!



i know i'm hungry,

but dont feel like eating!

i know i'm awake,

though all i do is dreaming!

and at the time i'm sleepy,

i do it all but sleeping!



through my window,

i saw a sight,

it was a shadow,

through the light!

i drew a rainbow in my mind,

as it came true, and shined so bright!

now i wonder,

whats wrong?

whats right?

for this love,

should i cope or should i fight?



The end,

28\5\2004

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Afzal Shauq's picture

very sweet and professionally done this poem... sure I am not wrong if I say you are good poet with new subjects to express... hope you will like my expression of love based peace thoughts too