WHEN I'M AROUND HIM

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When I'm around him I cant help but smile

Being with him is all worth while

When I'm around him my heart beats 5 times more fast

Oh how I want this feeling to last

When I'm around him I know I can be open to how I feel

And he will give me advise that is real

When I'm around him it's like no one is around

Oh what is this love I just found

When I'm around him I feel this feeling I cant explain

But I'm happy I'm not feeling any pain

When I'm around him I feel like I can fly

And when the day ends Im still not ready to say goodbye

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this for my best friend in the 6th grade, were not as close, but he's a great guy.

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Rhian Whitman's picture

I really like this.
It has a nice rhythm to it, and I can relate to what you're saying.