she was rather laconic
did not seem to talk much
one day she told me a secret
and down to the sentimental stairs
we went
in her reticent words...
phrases... i found myself lost
wondering who she was
exploring her own worlds
her quietness seemed infinite
and infinite seemed were her inner feelings
the thrills of my guessing
and the confusion of my being
short her sentences were
and so was our love
quiet had it begun
and up the stairs
into oblivion
it was
gone
Art & Stuff Like That
Great use of English - you have grasped the form and a fan. See my prose CW writes for art & stuff like that, then we can talk as much as you like. Verbosly and humbly sent ~~A~~