Underground

Walk the pavement and walk it rigth

I can only walk on the line

So much rage, anger and frustration

Tearing up my imagination

Brakes my spirit, drags me down

Down, to the underground

 

That is where I thrive and belong

Just listening to the underground’s song

So dark so sharp so dirty and mean

My creativity begins to stream

 

It has no rules no walls or limits

No cars or bombs or flaws within it

Just the voice of you, yourself

That listens and understands

 

What is this world we live in

That makes the underground seem so forgiving?


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justanotherscreename's picture

I really like this.

I really like this.

a.griffiths57's picture

Underground:

 

 

An awsome read is your poetry. Love the rhyming, truly sets if off. As our imagination takes hold so our creativity is initiated. Great read and so enjoyable.


 

 

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Muin's picture

Painfully beautiful.

Painfully beautiful.

sy75's picture

loved this piece excellent

loved this piece excellent work thankyou for sharing it. look forward to reading more :-)

AquarianMale's picture

 When reading this, you need

 

When reading this, you need to inhale the rhythm of words to fully appreciate it. I loved the rage, loved the fury, and loved the free spirited delicacies that are hidden within it; looking forward to reading more of your poems.  This one was amazing.

 

SSmoothie's picture

WowWow great piece!In

WowWow great piece!In particular

 So dark so sharp so dirty and mean

My creativity begins to stream

 

It has no rules no walls or limits

No cars or bombs or flaws within it

Just the voice of you, yourself

That listens and understands

"
aAnd the last line awesome but I won't give it away, let them read it! 
Cheers SS

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