In Peace

What a life I got?

Work every damn day.

Cook for people

than don't even say Thanks.

I am not in peace

not with this living I have.

I wish I could die

so this can stop.

This is not right.

I feel so out of breath.

But still waiting for death

to come arround and pick me up.



It feels like I can't live in peace.

People always bothering

and taking good things out of me.

I just want to die, without saying Bye Bye.

I just want to rest in peace after this life

but I want it to be now.



What is wrong with life?

This is not a life I got,

every damn day people is trying to make me cry.

Making me feel pain,

insulting me and saying lies in my face.

I just want my heart to stop and die.

Die... die... die...

I don't want another life.

I don't even want to exist.

I want to get out and scape from living.

I hope God is listening, and I know is just not me.

Or maybe this a punisment, and there is no use to wish.

The only hope I have is that this is going to end,

because everything the have a start,

eventually have an end.

By then my wish will be fulfill

I will be resting in peace.


















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Feeling down now

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Afzal Shauq's picture

well done a great love and lovely poem for peace..this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace

Afzal Shauq's picture

well done a great love and lovely poem for peace..this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace

Afzal Shauq's picture

well done a great love and lovely poem for peace..this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace

Corey Fox's picture

this is a serious piece of writing. it takes the reader in and makes them believe they are tired of this "life" one piece of advice, proofread. There are a few spelling missteps/mistakes etc.

one love

Corey

Anna Jenkins's picture

We all have days like this, days when depression and despair saturate every cell of our bodies. You have effectively captured this emotion.