What a life I got?
Work every damn day.
Cook for people
than don't even say Thanks.
I am not in peace
not with this living I have.
I wish I could die
so this can stop.
This is not right.
I feel so out of breath.
But still waiting for death
to come arround and pick me up.
It feels like I can't live in peace.
People always bothering
and taking good things out of me.
I just want to die, without saying Bye Bye.
I just want to rest in peace after this life
but I want it to be now.
What is wrong with life?
This is not a life I got,
every damn day people is trying to make me cry.
Making me feel pain,
insulting me and saying lies in my face.
I just want my heart to stop and die.
Die... die... die...
I don't want another life.
I don't even want to exist.
I want to get out and scape from living.
I hope God is listening, and I know is just not me.
Or maybe this a punisment, and there is no use to wish.
The only hope I have is that this is going to end,
because everything the have a start,
eventually have an end.
By then my wish will be fulfill
I will be resting in peace.
well done a great love and lovely poem for peace..this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace
well done a great love and lovely poem for peace..this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace
well done a great love and lovely poem for peace..this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace
this is a serious piece of writing. it takes the reader in and makes them believe they are tired of this "life" one piece of advice, proofread. There are a few spelling missteps/mistakes etc.
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Corey
We all have days like this, days when depression and despair saturate every cell of our bodies. You have effectively captured this emotion.