Elated I was...broken too;
Despondent, sad....too lonely to be true
The storms...the heartbreak...
I rose above it all.
Suppressed are the emotions deep enough
Not again am I willing to fall;
Suffering as I am, I often fake a smile
They still think I'm rude
My rudeness is my defence.
Both lonely and desperate to be alone...
With them, I'm cautiously tense.
But with the rays of the rising sun I
see hope...
Hope for them...hope for me...
For all the love, the happiness I see
Realise I do... this sadness is futile
Each small thing...the elation is worthwhile.
Even when alone, you are with you
Realise I do....this hope is
true!
Poetic title
Poetic title
From Car-el
This poem kind of has a pagan
This poem kind of has a pagan or earthly vibe to it. I can definitely relate to "both lonely and desperate to be alone." I couldn't have said it any better myself!
yes...the conflicts in my
yes...the conflicts in my head many a times originate from this feeling.
Well I think it is well
Well I think it is well written and I write a lot about similar content, so its relatable.