Silent weeping caused me red eyes
Tearstains are evaporating on the bedroom floor
My heart pounding faster than war drums
My ears still ring from the sudden silence
The intense conversations haunt me still
Every room reminds me of a tragic scene
I tremble as I touch the walls
The house feels empty now
All the love has died and bled out
The room is filled with sorrow
The eerie sound of a person in fear
Is still lingering in the hallway
I sigh and try to move on
My mind won’t let me forget
All is quite, but now I feel it all
The sadness has been left behind as they parted
Another great poem...I relate to this one alot as well. Thank you for critiquing some of my poetry! I'll continue to read yours...they're great :)