Where I Am

As the embers of the day

Die out along the westward range,

Patches of smoky clouds 

Rapidly rise overhead

Below where I am

 

There they merge into the black of night moving in

 

I think of a candle

In my quiet little den

Going out, I needn't 

Close my eyes

Dreaming my way back to the sunset

 

Then forward to the dawn ahead

 

But only in these moments -

Wisps of smoke rising,

Wick kissing a wax puddle -

Do I take full account of where I am

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The way you tie the fading

The way you tie the fading light to self‑awareness is powerful. Those quiet moments between sunset and dawn really do reveal where we stand.