Let me sign
This letter to you
Write my confessions
Of lifeless secret
Something you can have
Keep it
Cry over me
Over my grave
Speak for me
Be brave
Think of me in your sleep
The memory of me keep
The hugs and laughs
Let them last
In your mind
All inside
Now read and understand
I wasn't born to be who I am
So I ended this for you to see
That I am gone now
So just leave
Dear Johnny
it ended before it started
and now it is too long waiting
to be over. Best wishes,
your eternal x.
:D
A mournfull poem, the
A mournfull poem, the character sounds almost pleased they died! Your poem is macarbe but it holds no self-pity. The rhyming of the poem is realy good and about bitter sweet feelings and memories. Liked your poem an enjoyable read even if sad.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you
Thank you so much for your take on "Let Me Sign" :)
-J