You Make Me Feel Like A Child

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You make me feel like a child.

 

Like I am once again learning my own body parts and what they do. Finding my feet and hands and staring at them like I didn't know they existed.

But, now I am too old to try and bend myself to fit them in my mouth.

 

When you kiss me on the cheek as you meet and leave me I turn my head as my rooting reflex kicks in, only this time I am not looking for food from my mother but to catch your lips with my own. I don't yet understand that I cannot have what is not mine.

 

The idea of object permanence has not yet stuck in my head, but sugar, I have representational thoughts down. I can't see what is under your clothes, but I can imagine.

 

You make me feel like I am just now learning how to walk, my legs are made of jello and I balance just as easily on them.

 

This is imprinting, babes, I am learning love from you and maybe I haven't been able to grasp the law of conservation. Just because the look is different doesn't mean it isn't the same thing.

 

But you don't look like any of the other girls that broke my heart.

 

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DesertDreamer's picture

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You continue to confuse me... do you know that?

 

With poems like these I attempt to figure out who you wrote them about........

 

 

I leave your profile confused.... Most of the time.


~~We can fade away together one dream at a time.~~

LovingLovelace's picture

This was written about a girl

This was written about a girl who turned out to be exactly like the girls who break my heart. She was a fleeting fancy, a snake once you got to know her.

And a lot of time my poems are just filled with the female pronouns but no actual human behind them. Haha, thank you, but I feel like you are searching for meaning and depth when there are only words.

Love,
LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.

SH95's picture

!!!

Brilliant! 

 

LovingLovelace's picture

Simple yet to the point, your

Simple yet to the point, your a comment is awesome. Thank you Very much! 

 

Love, 

LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.

life_used_to_be_lifelike's picture

Ooooh

I am really liking this. 


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

LovingLovelace's picture

Thank you! Your comment was

Thank you! Your comment was written in just the right way I guess because it made me extremely happy for some odd reason. 

 

Love,

LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.

Kiddo's picture

(((( why is this subject doohickey even a thing??? )))

This is so good! I love the imagery you used in this. I wish I had something more specific to compliment but everything about this is ***flawless!

LovingLovelace's picture

Thank you! This really means

Thank you! This really means a lot! 

 

Sorry it took so long to respond. 

 

Love,

LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.

allets's picture

Could Not

...stop reading. Nice imagery, nice creationism, nicer transfer of a whole system into a small write - just nice - Lady A

 


 

 

LovingLovelace's picture

Thank you times a billion.

Thank you times a billion. I'm really glad you enjoyed this.

 

Love, 

LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.