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The Life We Loved
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In Dedication He called me crying,
The strongest boy I knew,
He told me his dad was dying,
The emotionally strongest man I knew,
We both cried,
The life we loved had died,
We felt as if a part of us had died,
The life we loved had died.
Beautiful poem. Only one
Beautiful poem. Only one Mistake is you wrote my instead of me. Other than that it's great. Do you think you should show it to David?
haha, thanks! I don't know.
haha, thanks! I don't know. We have to be strong for him, and I think this might make him break down. Even in my sucky writing, the feelings are too close to the surface at the moment.
If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.