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It took you a while to believe,
To stand before her door,
Her eyes lit up at your call,
Her feelings of hate no more.

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This was really hard because first we wrote a short story. Then we had to go back and take words and lines and make a poem out of it. You could not add words. It was fun but so very frustrating.

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©5 October 2012 - 3:05pm — LovingLovelace
5 October 2012 - 4:33pm — allets
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8 October 2012 - 12:15am — LovingLovelace
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Haha, alright! I'll get right

Haha, alright! I'll get right on that!

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