As I Fall

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As I fall I remember your kiss…
Your hair, your eyes, your lies…
And other things I will never miss…

As I drown in broken dreams…
Your touch, your love, your anger…
And things that fell apart at the seams…

As I make my way down…
Your fingers, your lips, your lies…
And secret things to drown…

As I fall I remember your kiss….
Your smell, your look, your anger…
And other things I will never miss…

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Journal Entry #2
9/19/12

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SSmoothie's picture

What a good piece I love e

What a good piece I love e idea and the irony of the last line! A delightful and insight little piece! CheerSS


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Thank-you, :v Love, LovingLov

Thank-you,
:v

Love,
LovingLovelace


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roses.are.transparent's picture

I love this one!

One of my favourites that I've read by you! This is amazing!

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<(^.^<)

Thank-you! And I know you have read a lot of them, lol.

Love,
LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.

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WOOOOOT! finally another

WOOOOOT! finally another poem. Thank you sooooo much. I like your work