Take Me With You

I see you fly.
Touch the sky.

Im here on the ground.
Far from you.

I want to fly with you.
Take me with you.

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I am moved by the depth of your thoughts

This is GOOD...to say the least. Here is a poetic response by me:

You see me fly
And even I
See you fly
Both of us soaring
Higher and nigh...

You aren't on the ground
For your thoughts abound
Higher and higher
As you come soaring
Higher...and nigh...

Do not be afraid
Do not look down
Just look up high
And from eagles and angels
Find out how easy
It is to fly
Higher and higher
Higher...and nigh
If you do care
Or trust me truly
Come flying higher
Higher...and nigh
And see how the horizon
Embraces the sky....
(To you O talented young poetess...from another fellow poet...EMMENAY.


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.