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A Daughter's Uncertainty

You say that you'll walk me down the aisle at my wedding.
That you'll be there for the birth of my first child.
But when I see you rub the spot where your heart rests,
I'm not so sure.
I cry when I see you clutch your chest.
I know that you and I don't the best realtionship that we should.
I tried to do all that I could love you but protect myself as well.
We have had such vicious fights.
I cried until my chest hurt.
Somedays I hated you.
Then I think that those might be the last words I ever say to you.
I just want to forget about the past
because I want this relationship to last.
I can't listen to "Wish You Were Here" by Pink Floyd anymore.
Cause when I do it makes me think of how much I will wish that you were there when you are gone.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My dad and I have a love/ hate relationship. This past year I faught with my father about everything. There were months when we wouldn't speak to each other. Then things got somewhat better. I wrote this poem because life is too short. I realized that I just wanted to move on and try to have the best relationship that I can have with him.

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©2 August 2012 - 10:11am — LoveMe93
2 August 2012 - 10:30am — SSmoothie
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We a very accountable point

We a very accountable point of view! A great write because it is an enlightened write! There is always hope! Love / hate yeah 2 sides of the same coin. ;) Cheerss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

2 August 2012 - 10:35am — LoveMe93
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Thank you.

You are always there giving me such wonderful comments and encouraging words. Thank You from the bottom of my heart.

Love,
LoveMe93