Tears and Tries

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Love poems

You said i weren't the one you were looking for,
Why did it take you so long to realise?
Just a few days ago you said you loved me, and now you dont? Was it all lies?
Every bit of our relationship, i could sit and analyse,
But everytime i read our convo's a part of me dies,
I feel stupid because of my failed tries,
I tried to get you back, to compromise,
But you turned me down, I'm not surprised,
My mind says 'stay strong' but my heart cries,
My mind knows you're gone forever, but my heart tells me otherwise,
But even if you came back to apologize,
For me to take you back would be unwise,
You kicked me out of your life, and didnt even think twice,
You just sacrificed everything, our memories, talks, feeling of being in paradise,
The pain you caused me, you could of minimized,
But you didnt, and now its you im starting to despise,
But its okay, ive got a friend who identifies,
The pain im going through, and gives advice,
For me to realise that your lies, aren't worth my tears and tries

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Bloodbutterfly's picture

I really like it!

It's great, I really enjoyed reading it, and it was quite easy to relate to. Good job ^___^


You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

readmy5tuff's picture

ive been thru something

ive been thru something similar. hang in there keep penning

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

MyinsecureSelf's picture

Great poem; full of

Great poem; full of emotion.
I like it =]

lovelife123's picture

Thanks :)

Thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

a poem like a strong rap

a poem like a strong rap song.. loved it;)

lovelife123's picture

Haha thanks ;)

Haha thanks ;)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

allets's picture

I You He She Poem

Take out those words, if a poem remains, you're okay ~ A ~


 

 

lovelife123's picture

What do you mean? 

What do you mean? 


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein