Wait and See

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Love poems

You stole my heart which is rare,
Made me feel like I was walking on thin air,
You made my heart skip a beat whenever we would meet,
You'd always smile right before you'd speak,
It'd make my knees go all funny and weak,
But I guess that only lasted for a while,
The same goes for my smile,
Everything was going so great,
Now you say all you feel is hate,
You ripped out my heart and threw it away,
Right before you'd told me you'd stay,
I thought you were my knight in shining armour,
But I was wrong, maybe it was karma?
But what did I do to deserve this?
Must've been something real bad if you couldn't forgive,
I fought for you as hard as I could,
Maybe a bit more than what I should,
I actually believed we'd last,
Didn't think we'd end so fast,
Everything happens for a reason,
Maybe I've just been given freedom?
Maybe God has something better planned for me,
I'll just have to wait and see

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Really hate breakups :( and I didn't know what to write as the tittle for the poem so I wrote 'wait and see' just so that I had something to write, if you have any suggestions then I'm all ears :)

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SSmoothie's picture

Nicely done! Cheers SS

Nicely done! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

you becoming better and

you becoming better and better :) this is actully awesome and i love the way u used thin air, knees go funy, knight in shining armour,.. which is impossible for me :D no doubt, one of ur best poem ;)
ps. i like positive thoughts in ending, with ''God'' :)

lovelife123's picture

Aww thank you :) i didnt

Aww thank you :) i didnt really like this one that much, i had so much to write but i didnt want to make it a really long poem because i know how boring it can be reading long poems, so this is how i left it


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

haha.. may be.. but good job

haha.. may be.. but good job ;)

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein