You stole my heart which is rare,
Made me feel like I was walking on thin air,
You made my heart skip a beat whenever we would meet,
You'd always smile right before you'd speak,
It'd make my knees go all funny and weak,
But I guess that only lasted for a while,
The same goes for my smile,
Everything was going so great,
Now you say all you feel is hate,
You ripped out my heart and threw it away,
Right before you'd told me you'd stay,
I thought you were my knight in shining armour,
But I was wrong, maybe it was karma?
But what did I do to deserve this?
Must've been something real bad if you couldn't forgive,
I fought for you as hard as I could,
Maybe a bit more than what I should,
I actually believed we'd last,
Didn't think we'd end so fast,
Everything happens for a reason,
Maybe I've just been given freedom?
Maybe God has something better planned for me,
I'll just have to wait and see
Nicely done! Cheers SS
Nicely done! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein
you becoming better and
you becoming better and better :) this is actully awesome and i love the way u used thin air, knees go funy, knight in shining armour,.. which is impossible for me :D no doubt, one of ur best poem ;)
ps. i like positive thoughts in ending, with ''God'' :)
Aww thank you :) i didnt
Aww thank you :) i didnt really like this one that much, i had so much to write but i didnt want to make it a really long poem because i know how boring it can be reading long poems, so this is how i left it
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein
haha.. may be.. but good job
haha.. may be.. but good job ;)
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein