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When I look at you, I see sparks flying,
But when I realise you can't be mine, I feel like crying,
You are perfect for me, but I don't have your heart nor the key,
My love for you is so true, but I can't come in between you two,
I love you but you love her,
I'm crazy for you as you are for her,
I can't help but feel this way, its so wrong, yet feels so right,
I'm in a tunnel yet I see no light,
To be with you, I will always pray,
And its so true what thay say,
'Loving you is like trying to touch a star, I know that I can never reach you but I can't help but try'

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©8 November 2012 - 4:22pm — lovelife123
11 January 2014 - 3:49pm — a.griffiths57
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    To be so obviously in

 

 

To be so obviously in love with someone is wonderful shame the relationship can't be. Lovely writing and word usage, a good read.

 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

11 January 2014 - 3:52pm — lovelife123
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Thank you :)

Thank you :)

"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

10 November 2012 - 9:14pm — SSmoothie
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Now, this is beautiful! Young

Now, this is beautiful! Young fresh but also wise, it needs a little formatting and the star reference is very cute. Cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

10 November 2012 - 9:22pm — lovelife123
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Thanks :)

Thanks :)

"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

9 November 2012 - 8:06pm — Lostworld
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awwwww!!!!

awwwwwwwwww!! nice forget that committe about that but i love that that something dont let that get to you keep up the work keep that up please love love it!!!!!

loving marquazhia

9 November 2012 - 9:25pm — lovelife123
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Aww thanks :)

Aww thanks :)

"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

8 November 2012 - 4:59pm — GOHIL48
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not your best but beautiful

not your best but beautiful poem:) loved it..
and so sad too

8 November 2012 - 5:49pm — lovelife123
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Thanks :) and i agree, my

Thanks :) and i agree, my friend wanted me to write this poem for her to give to someone, and it wasnt that good because the feelings weren't true

"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

8 November 2012 - 5:52pm — GOHIL48
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if thats the story behind

if thats the story behind this poem then you've done great job:)

8 November 2012 - 5:55pm — lovelife123
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Thanks :)

Thanks :)

"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

19 November 2012 - 11:04pm — readmy5tuff
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i know how this felt. you

i know how this felt. you should check out the crush on my profile it has a similar theme

19 November 2012 - 11:24pm — lovelife123
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Okay :)

Okay :)

"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein