Tough Love

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Love poems

The skies are clear,
The sun is bright,
All i want,
Is you in sight.

I want you here,
Your presence is enough,
But i can't have you,
It will be tough.

We belong together,
you and me forever,
Although our future is bright,
The time isn't right.

We'll be together someday,
That's all i pray,
To have you by my side,
To be your bride.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is one of my very first poems, please tell me what you think! all comments are welcome even the negative ones :)

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Cherryheart's picture

Waow.This was so simple and

Waow.This was so simple and sweet <3
Loved it (:

lovelife123's picture

Aww thank you :)

Aww thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

loved it:)

loved it:)

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

twisted_soul's picture

This shows ur potential as a

This shows ur potential as a poet, showing ur heart. But I feel u need to open up ur herat more, not saying this in a bad way. I'm saying with growth ur poems will be outstanding and descriptive words r a poets best friend

lovelife123's picture

Thanks, i'll try to do that

Thanks, i'll try to do that next time :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

allets's picture

Togetherness

You and I together forever, you as bride. Nice dreamy poem in action - Lady A


 

 

lovelife123's picture

Thanks

Thanks


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

Marshall's picture

writing about love helps ease

writing about love helps ease the pain it can cause, at least it does for me.
don't write to please others. write what your heart feels.
this is a safe place to say what you can or cannot say to others
take advantage of it.
i want to read more
keep it up

lovelife123's picture

Thanks :)

Thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

SSmoothie's picture

Awwwww! Sweet! Nice poem!

Awwwww! Sweet! Nice poem!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

lovelife123's picture

Thanks! :)

Thanks! :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

montyc6's picture

this poem was simply amazing.

this poem was simply amazing. no other way to describe it

lovelife123's picture

Aww thank you :)

Aww thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

allets's picture

Your Audience

Don't forget us though, while you please yourself. We love solid imagry (in a nice way I say this) poetry is like a sculptor chipping away the spaces to reveal the statue, poetry uses words like a chisel to hack away flotsom and the empty ideas to create a solid image that an audience (and other poets) can see. Pick up the paint brush and give us pictures from your mind please - welcome to PP - we are a strange lot (no no I mean I am a strange lot, everybody else is pretty okay) - Lady A


 

 

lovelife123's picture

Haha thanks, i'll make sure i

Haha thanks, i'll make sure i try to do that next time


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein