....dunno

sometimes things seam so out of place
lost in life, this neverending race
not knowing which way to turn
running untill all your mucles burn
not knoing where it is your trying to find
twards the future but always remebring whats behind
it hurts more to stop and think about it all
like holding something you cant let fall
yet it still breaks because yoyr holding to tight
no matter what you do its never right

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sanctus's picture

You have so many spelling and

You have so many spelling and grammar errors it makes it hard to appreciate your words

David Lopez's picture

i like this one more then i normal oh im adding new chapters to the story so if u want to check out the poems it be nice