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Laughter is a form of grace
Upon any happy face
A tear, is just downfall
Left to view for one and all
No matter which you chose to show
Others will truly never know
What feeling dwells inside
If you only ever run and hide
So sob when your heart is broken
Weep with true love unspoken
But giggle when the time is right
When friends joke and play fight
Your feelings are meant to be shared
Not to be hidden, don’t be scared
Of what others will believe if you show
The truth is a matter of how well they know
Because you can't live hidden, walled within
Lest you revisit the loony bin
So laugh, so cry, do all that you can
It is the way it is, and since it began
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Laughter is a form of grace
upon a happy face
a tear is just another downfall
seen by one and all
but no matter which one you show
nobody can ever know
what true feeling dwells inside
if all you do is run and hide
so cry when your heart is broken
and cry when true love goes unspoken
but also laugh when the time is right
laugh when your friends play fight
because emotion is meant to be shared
never to be hidden never scared
of what another will think if it shows
because that's the way life goes
you can't live if you hide it all within
unless u want to end up in a loony bin
so laugh and cry all you can
because that the way life has been since it all began
Amen! .....
Amen!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I absolutly agree with this, most people I know dont laugh enough, and I know this one girl that doesnt cry b/c people are around...its really weird but thats why i love her =)
...life is the longest thing u do theres no way it can be too short
To long of a tital for my liking...haha...just kidding...cool poem but some of your poems contrdict eachother.