I Feel Consumed (song)

Your there corrupting my thoughts

I feel at a loss

Nothing seems exciting

No reason for fighting

You turned me to death

There's no hope for me left

This black ink in my veins

As soon as it rains

Today I walk the dark trail

Though I have failed

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

Today I walk the dark trail

Though I have failed

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

Now I'm somewhere I know

My chance has been blown

I see all these people dead

Wondering what they said

I can only smile at them

Because they died from their sin

I see the bodies of my friends

Waiting for my time to end

Today I walk the dark trail

Though I have failed

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

Today I walk the dark trail

Though I have failed

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

I see a sea of ink

My heart is no more pink

I deserve better than this

You wouldn't even give me a kiss

You stabbed at my heart

Tore me all apart

Today I walk the dark trail

Though I have failed

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

Today I walk the dark trail

Though I have failed

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

I will walk the dark trail

And you know that I fail

I can no longer resume

I feel consumed

I've been though hell

But to you I've only fell

You will never understand

And you no longer can

Feel the pain that's real

This is how I feel

You all led me to this

I just want one kiss

From my love

You are no longer a dove

I wish you would love me

Maybe then you would see

How I could be

And I won't be consumed

Author's Notes/Comments: 

So sad…I got rejected once again

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Morningglory's picture

So sad

Would like to hear you sing this song aloud. It's good to see you pouring that black oozing pain onto the page.


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SeaOfInk's picture

Thx and my friends are trying

Thx and my friends are trying to help me sing it in a certain beat because I can't find a beat

Morningglory's picture

Cool

What kind of music do you like and what sort of style to your friends imagine it?


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SeaOfInk's picture

They can probably think of

They can probably think of some electronic ideas, pop ideas, and rock ideas…

Morningglory's picture

cool

If you ever record it, I'd love to hear it! I just sang it. It was fun. cheeky


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SeaOfInk's picture

Ok

Ok