The end has come, it was so dark
I see now the flashing lights
The rush of people under me
Their efforts are futile
I'm gone from this world
They just won't let me go
I see the light but can't reach it
The shock of life trying to come back
I look down and see my family is crying
Too little too late I had the means
The gun and the booze were all I needed
The booze to give me strength for my act
The gun to carry out the actions
Screwed up too much and this is my way
My way to escape the pain of life
I look down and see the masses scrambling
The sheet is pulled over my face
They have given up and let me go
what if some of us don't want to let you go?
aww...but what bout your other poem about that girl who is ur drug? ne ways...great poem...come talk to me, huh? hehe.
also...lets talk soon - on aim or whatever, k? tehe.
awesome work!!
luv
fr*sty
p.s. i'll try and not to critique sum of ur poems for a while - hehe otherwise i'll have no more left lol
also - i can steer you towards some of my better work - since my list of poems/songs are very long haha. tty latrz