Let me go

The end has come, it was so dark

I see now the flashing lights

The rush of people under me

Their efforts are futile

I'm gone from this world

They just won't let me go

I see the light but can't reach it

The shock of life trying to come back

I look down and see my family is crying

Too little too late I had the means

The gun and the booze were all I needed

The booze to give me strength for my act

The gun to carry out the actions

Screwed up too much and this is my way

My way to escape the pain of life

I look down and see the masses scrambling

The sheet is pulled over my face

They have given up and let me go

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Athena LaFlair's picture

what if some of us don't want to let you go?

Mary Bibbs's picture

aww...but what bout your other poem about that girl who is ur drug? ne ways...great poem...come talk to me, huh? hehe.

also...lets talk soon - on aim or whatever, k? tehe.
awesome work!!

luv
fr*sty

p.s. i'll try and not to critique sum of ur poems for a while - hehe otherwise i'll have no more left lol
also - i can steer you towards some of my better work - since my list of poems/songs are very long haha. tty latrz