You're in my life

Why'd you stop me

I wanted to do it

The gun in my hand

Gun to my head

I never knew

Anyone loved me

Never knew anyone cared

I had a family who cared

Now they want me to die

I tried so hard to get that wish

Then you came into my life

The gun went down

The sun came up

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amazing work brett. i love it.

(and yes, i'll try to critique some more of ur poems, if u dun like the comments, then u can delete em tehe)

xoxo
m

p.s. in my pics: im the one in the shorter dress