Oh, me!
I'm caught between
A fisherman's tale and
His hook and line.
I'm alone in the sea,
Like Jonah's whale,
Like how no-one is free
Who is alive!
What a terrible dream,
What a beautiful sky,
Does it mean anything?
Does it soften your eyes?
And the more that you see,
The more that you try,
And the less it will be
Worth your time
Very nice. Kinda reminds me
Very nice. Kinda reminds me of someone standing up to a betrayal by a loved one. Left alone in the sea, the more that you try and the less it will be worth your time. awesome lines!
Thanks
Interesting analysis, I had none of that in mind when I wrote it, though I can totally see it being read that way