the world is silent,
silently moving
from where i am standing
there's nothing to see
somewhere inside it:
a nobody moving
having a party
and spilling their drink
characters wasting
surrender to think
all innocence gone
to the empty instinct
hedonists hasting
and pacing to pleasure
running around
and then going extinct
something inside
is vaguely colliding:
every existing
is living in me
the moment of life
eternity touches
and mingles with time
becomes all to see
so tell me what is freedom?
what makes a man unique?
contrive for me a reason
to build or buy or eat
comfort or confusion?
apartment or the street?
self is self-defeating
there's nothing here to keep
Excellent
rhyme scheme.
,but I agree with KS, each day we go on,move on,surviving,looking forward,forged stronger because of these things you speak of..
do I speak without understanding?
i assure you,not!
Koko~
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
i am not sure
what am i speaking of?
the mundanity of life?
the despair of hedonism?
salvation comes in one form only.
Yes
that is soooo true!
:)
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
The largesse blows you away
Then we reassemble ourselves
To survive
Another day.
KindredSpirit