wonder what i would've done if i was something wonderful
thoughtful talk of tangible increasingly contrived
catheter cathedrals cast a careless candid thunderbolt
caught inside a dream where all my hellos are goodbyes
everlasting element of endo-cratic uncontrol
separate the summer with the coldest winter night
serpentine commanders set the battle in another soul
sentient surroundings render neverending fight
flesh's final folly, fetishizing feeling fanciful
wonder what i'd fathom if i only had the right
Applause to your sound man...
Applause to your sound man... so many alliterations and assonances... has such a nice flow... but what's even greater are the metaphors and juxtapositions you've implemented
"Catheter cathedrals..." I love that
thank you
have you written anything lately? haven't seen you post anything in a while!