human dichotomy

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wonder what i would've done if i was something wonderful

thoughtful talk of tangible increasingly contrived

 

catheter cathedrals cast a careless candid thunderbolt

caught inside a dream where all my hellos are goodbyes

 

everlasting element of endo-cratic uncontrol

separate the summer with the coldest winter night

 

serpentine commanders set the battle in another soul

sentient surroundings render neverending fight

 

flesh's final folly, fetishizing feeling fanciful

wonder what i'd fathom if i only had the right

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Applause to your sound man...

Applause to your sound man... so many alliterations and assonances... has such a nice flow... but what's even greater are the metaphors and juxtapositions you've implemented 

"Catheter cathedrals..." I love that

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thank you

have you written anything lately? haven't seen you post anything in a while!