Livelovelife

What people think, what people say
This will be wondered day by day
But what we gain is pain and stress
taken by society's biggest weakness
We all say: it's wrong to judge, wrong to play
But in the end we're doing it anyway
Time is short to think it twice
SO let's do this and roll the dice
This life is yours
so pick your course
Don't hesitate to wear the slacks
life is hard and full of cracks
take your jump or you will fall
make a bridge to save it all

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Zephiradiamond's picture

Interesting

This poem is well written. I had fun reading it.

I can feel the emotions. Very Good!


©Zèphira. 

livelovelife's picture

thnx it means a lot to hear

thnx it means a lot to hear this! :)

9inety's picture

very nice

good advice, it is as you have written

it is worth it

Peace

Dylan

ps

keep

writing


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

livelovelife's picture

I just started writing, so it

I just started writing, so it means a lot to me! And i will keep doing it! :)