Take one last breath and look around,
the sky is falling to the ground,
the oceans crashing with the stars,
the world we knew is left with scars,
people dying in the streets,
everyone faced with defeat,
raining chaos from the sky,
consuming hope and all our lies,
and all you hope for is to die.
another opinion
I hope your poem turns out to be wrong... and that God has mercy on all creation...
The image of stars crashing into the sea is sad but strangely beautiful
Thank you