That Day At The Fair

That day at the fair,

one of the best days of my life,

drove in,

cars everywhere,

walked at your cow stall,

saw your cow,

but you were nowhere to be seen,

walked where the campers were,

out of luck i found you,

resting your eyes on a couch...

lovely wake up call..huh?

walking around for 2 hours straight,

not a worry thought in sight,

hand in hand we walked,

past the rides, exibits, and children,

the cow you showed that morning,

im sorry i couldnt be there,

2nd place, i knew you could do it!

so proud of you baby,

who wouldnt be?

then the 2 hours were up..

met my dad,

then thankfully...we had another 3 hours together,

ditched aaron,

walked down to the river,

then the fun of the fair began..

the most magical kiss,

that i never will forget,

but suddently interupted,

by a call on the walkie talkie,

thinking in my head,

god damnit!...great timing..

words coming out of it sounded familiar,

it was his dad,

we walked to his camper,

i met his family,

then we went to midnight madness,

the rides were incredible,

so much fun!

i can recall,

the most magical time of my whole life,

was on one of those rides,

the ferris wheel...

the sun was setting,

then it stops,

right on the top,

then it was so spontanious,

it just happened,

right then and there,

his lips touched mine,

stayed there for quite a while id say!

then we walked hand and hand,

until we got to my car,

then he gave me something,

it was a teddy bear..

that made me so happy,

then we kissed goodnight,

i will never forget that day,

that day at the fair.

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Derek Taylor's picture

Lauren this peice is very touching i think it could improve if there was no vioelence in it no swearing so that it can be rated G so all your grand kids can read it some day well good work lauren i love you dont stop rightin poems there really really good-Derek

P.S. Thanks :)