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UnCrit'd Work "Emotions" 5 - 20 - 03
It begins with a vibration
From the hollows of the heart
Travels up to make a sensation
And escape, through lips, depart
Collected by an ear of whole
And consumed by the willing mind
I sit and listen to the things you've told
They shake me in due time
Your thoughts travel down my spine
Shatter a heart of pure will
Your thoughts then consume my mind
As the world slows, stands still
My heart conveys what lips won't say
As the feelings leave the dark
They travel to my eyes, now a bay
Then the dam breaks, a tear starts
Salty tears of an emotion
Instigated by your aggression
Have stroke home with succession
And freed me of my depression...
i love it it is one of your best ever. it is now my secound favorite. keep up the good work.
I like it! Nicely worded and i like the subject material (*wink wink) :-). I especially like ur comment at the bottm! lol. Good job!