These Walls

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These walls have held

For all time

A beast of great burden

Of the body and mind

They have so longed

To give in

To at last be free

Free the daemon...

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Marina Olevsky's picture

A very enjoyable piece. A whole slew of metaphors leap to mind in considering this demon, and how it is different for each person. Very nice.

Karyn Indursky's picture

I feel that person imprisoned in the walls. It's like the more I show my true self the more people want me confined to be who they want and to change me. The walls move in as I struggle for the freedom of being myself and not letting these people crush me. Thanks for sharing such an insightful poem.