The Shepherd

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Religion

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We have all felt the pain

We have all tried in vain

To achieve a shade from this rain



We have struggled far too long

We have tried to be so strong

But it seems that we were wrong



We are now the lost and cast out

We are now in the presence of no doubt

That this may be an unheard shout



I led them all to their demise

I led them, I heard their cries

Now they drown, before my eyes...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

my view on religion expressed in the abstract form :-D

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Travis Scott's picture

I really liked this poem. Actually I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I would appreciate it if you would read a few of my works, tell me what you think about them, and give me some pointers.