"Echoes..." 4 - 18 - 03
you know you regret the decision
that separated your family, the division
which brought about its demise
you know you hurt the ones you love
the ones you put your own needs above
so that you could live in futility
you know you harbor a deep hate
for the ones who stole the plate
that fed and sheltered you
for all this hate, hurt and regret
you try so hard not to forget
that anger, pain and self-pity
will get you nowhere...
I've one called Echoes myself, and it seems that the general emotion is inevitably conveyed in any such-titled poem. I don't know about the vocabulary statement, but hey then again nice is concise, right? I enjoyed very much reading more of your lyrix, and I'll surely be back here soon.