"The Lost Battle" 12 - 15 - 02
it is in this hopeless maze
surrounded by despair
that i lock my lost gaze
on the hope of doing fair
i have chosen to go on
to take the chance to live
but, for now, it won't be long
before i have no more to give
i tread on thru the quicksand
the thickening loss of will
it is this now i execute my plan
hope that it will cure the ill
i unsheath my weapon, hold it tight
plunge it deep and true
coming soon, the end of the night
to once again see you
it was in this, this vile i hold
that was my salvation, last hope
but in my ear, the Fates have told
it was not Hope but Death's grope
so as i try to grip, hold on to reality
my life begins the slip, quickly losing sanity
i fought so hard, i tried the last fight
but i lost the battle, lost my life on this night...
-The Lost One
a valiant try, i must say
you fought so hard and true
but it was your own salvation
that was, in the end, who undid you
so come, now rest, for eternity
in my humble abode
it is, in here that you will see
all the things i have in store...
-Death/Devil/Fate (whatever you believe in lol)
very good i liked it you have a gift keep writing