pedals of the pure tell unto me,
since you are so sure,
of how true my lover be
do they feel unconditionally
that there heart is happy
or do they wander vigilantly
filandering between wants and needs
please i beg for assurance
that their love is true
i don't wish to be a nuisance
your pedals i'll pluck 'til you do...
LOVELY PIECE
Lovely write here, I truly enjoyed it. I do not believe you remember me. I had another name on here, snow_angel...but my name was Michelle Staten. We've spoken a lot on msn, but sadly lost contact. I had to change everything over due to circumstances that were out of my control. If you don't remember me, if you read some of my other poems, you might remember. Once again, a very beautiful peice you have here.
Michelle