One last tear

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One Last Tear  

               There once was a family like many families today that on have one parent in the house hold. Anyway we take you back to the year 1995 where the was a planning of a divorce.Now there were three childern two sons and a daughter.The two sons are Both older and younger  then then daughter .The childern name's are Mike,Anthony,and Angel.The parents are Mike and Maira .The parents decided on the divorce on Christmas eve in 1995, and was final in 1996.

Now in the year 2002 the mother and father have joint custody .The childern aren't to happy with their father,they happen to be very upset with him .



One night before Christmas eve Angel gets a phone call from her grandmother telling her that her father is in the hospital .He is in a coma.Now Angel brust in to tear becuase the night before she had talk to her father and told him that she hated him and wished he would die because he is never there when she needed him to be.Now she has in her head that he is going to die because of her.She is crying her eyes out .Her brother Anthony comes upstairs to see whats wrong she gives him the phone and their grandmother tells him there is a tear running down his face as well.



When their mother gets  home she see them crying she asks what is wrong.

The daughter tells her mother now the mother is in tears.

They waited till Mike gets home and tell him then they go to the hospital .The daughter is in her room crying her heart and souls away she hasn't stopped crying for awhole day.On Christmas eve morning her father passes away from complcations with diabities.She is heartbroken now the mother calls the girls boyfriend Nick  to come to the hospital to try and cheer her up,but when he got there she was still devastated over the lost of her father.

On Christmas the girl took her life by drink a whole bottle of Jack Daniels and taking pills.On Christmas morning when the mother found her she had a heart attack thankfully it didn't kill her the daughter how ever was not dead she was in a troble state.She sleeps like an angel without any pain.A week later she awakes lying in her hospital bed .Her mother is sleeping in the chair next to her.  Angel allowes her mother to procide on sleeping.She calls on the nusre she comes in with food and Angel eats .When her mother awoke to fine her daughter alive she jumps with glee.Calling on her brother they rush in to see her .She how ever is glad to see them but yet still in pain from the lost of her father.Then her boyfriend enters the room and she gets so happy.They leave them to talk upon themselfs .He was crying in the relive of that his girlfriend was still alive.She is crying too but of the fact that she is still alive but yet she is so happy to be in her boyfriends arms once again.

He asked her why, why did you try to take your own life dont you love me anymore.She said baby of course I love you im just not happy with the fact that I told my father to die and he did.You wouldn't understand how bad I feel.He said no I feel worse .How  said Angel.Because the women I love choose a bottel of Jd over talking to me about the death of her father.I'm sorry I had a lot of problems at the time but I'm better now.O'k but talk to your mom please you know she is the one that found you she had a heart attack.She did?,YES. See we still love you and care for you .Please I want you to go to get some form of help. O'k I guess.Thankyou .... After she was released from the hospital they went to her fathers grave so she could say one last goodbye .She talked to his grave and as the left she had a smile on her but you could tell it was just for show for deep inside her you could she tears and pain her heart was bleeding hurting her deep down inside her.

Yet she did not cry one bit and hasn't ever since.Ten years later she has married a jerk,the biggest jerk   in the world .He hit her ,cheated on her,and got two other girls pregant has she her self was with his child yet she didn't cry.When he left her she still didn't cry .Then he came back to her she took him in and help hm though is other marriage .At the end he went back to hitting her and cheating her.Still no tear running down her face .He left again.

That Christmas she and her son Jose went to her mothers, and she saw her ex-boyfriend, Nick the one who helped her through her father death, but she was embarassed on how she looked, because she had cuts and bruses all over.Yet she moved back into the old house where she grew up and her and Nick started to talk, then  they fall in love again .

On that Valentine's Day he asked her to marry him and she said" yes."   About a year later  on Christmas eve at their wedding she finally shedded her tear of joy,happiness,and love while saying her wedding vows:Nike, "I love you with all my heart and i am glade to become you wife on this very day and this very night.You are my one and only.You were there for my through out my trobled years and through my fathers death 12 years ago and you are always there for me.Now i shall always be there for you now and forever more.I knew i Loved from the day i saw you and was reminded of that love when i came home to once againto be able to find your beloved body , mind , and soul."

From that day on

her heart has healed itself and  has opened itself to the world once again.

The End      

      Written By:

                                 Candice-Leigh OBrien Rodriguez

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

Wow What a powerful piece!

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Hey there! =^_^= Nice story...its kinda sad @ da beginning tho...really good. hehe...keep it up!

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