"Whatever happens tonight stays between us"

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I think about that kiss

on an empty street,

our voices echoing off the conrete walls
You wanted it

I don't kow why

 

You said we are the same
Our tongues move and mimick the other
You bit my lower lip
I stirred
squeezed my legs together
You don't know what you did
But I saw it,

in the bathroom
Evidence and a grin

 

like a loaded gun
baby
with your fingers in my hair
go ahead,

 

take me down

I'm already there

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Incompl's picture

Indie

I absolutely loved this! I really dig your writing style, I can imagine this as an indie song :)


Let your teeth show

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Thank you! Ah, I only wish I

Thank you! Ah, I only wish I could write Indie songs. They happen to be my favorite :)


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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 I whispered words I dare not

 I whispered words I dare not speak

Grabbed you by the waist, swept you off your feet

In the bathroom, I made a glance

Said “Let’s try” to make my desire dance.

Bit my wrist as I dare not try

To make it known to everyone inside

Took you to a place no one would know

Didn’t want to put on a show

Your hair was soft as I swept my fingers through it

Grabbed your lips as my tongue slipped

One night to change it all

 

This is for you my china doll.

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As far as rhymey rhymes go...

As far as rhymey rhymes go... I love this. I would say.. Try it again free styled. 


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.