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I was basking in self pity and pine needles
Your self-righteous anger had been resurrected and
you gave me a title

the scum of all scums

I wasn't even surprised this time

You make sure that I know know not to bring whores around and
I explained to you how we are at opposite ends of a wall

I have ruined your aspirations to be a mother,
you have murdered my attempts at being a daughter

And as it stands, we have both lost at the same war
and,
i dont know many people who can pull a
thing like that off

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©27 June 2012 - 10:12pm — life_used_to_be...
26 August 2012 - 6:25am — running_with_rabbits
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"I have ruined your

"I have ruined your aspirations to be a mother,
you have murdered my attempts at being a daughter"
those lines almost made me cry

Much Love

Ashley

21 July 2012 - 6:17am — SSmoothie
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GOSH!!!

you are so gifted with meatiness in your work that only whets the appetite for more! I agree with B! Cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

21 July 2012 - 6:12am — Beavis
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I am constantly amazed at how

I am constantly amazed at how intimate and personal your poems feel, while at the same time hitting so many people, emotionally, square in the face. I am simply in awe of your talent as a writer. You say more in 13 lines than many of us can say in 13 pages.