I would have done all the
pretty things they talked about
Spent my last five bucks on a pack of
no jokes and it makes me wanna
change my name
And last night I was inlove, today
I'm in something much bigger
They stuck the Jesus book in my
door slot
saying I need to know Him and find Him
and it makes me wonder just what I
should be doing with my time
cuz, i havent been doing much with
my spiritual side
lately
but oh well, shelly's saving me up those
morphine pills, and i cant wait to
go on that ride
So when the night shifts into mode
I hope you have nowhere to go
i've got a taste in my mouth that
needs figuring out, my friend
Nice...I like the rawness, the palpable energy of your words. And I always imagine what you will be writing 20-30 years from now. You are so good already.
A very strange but intriguing read indeed and i don"t claim to wholly understand it but there is something about it that captures your attention and i say well done indeed. I think stanza four and six really some it up. Enjoyed the read cheers.
I LOVE this one.
I really do