Pretty Things

I would have done all the

pretty things they talked about

Spent my last five bucks on a pack of

no jokes and it makes me wanna

change my name



And last night I was inlove, today

I'm in something much bigger



They stuck the Jesus book in my

door slot

saying I need to know Him and find Him

and it makes me wonder just what I

should be doing with my time

cuz, i havent been doing much with

my spiritual side

lately



but oh well, shelly's saving me up those

morphine pills, and i cant wait to

go on that ride



So when the night shifts into mode

I hope you have nowhere to go



i've got a taste in my mouth that

needs figuring out, my friend




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Pamela Lawrence's picture

Nice...I like the rawness, the palpable energy of your words. And I always imagine what you will be writing 20-30 years from now. You are so good already.

bendergender's picture

A very strange but intriguing read indeed and i don"t claim to wholly understand it but there is something about it that captures your attention and i say well done indeed. I think stanza four and six really some it up. Enjoyed the read cheers.

Talisha Brittingham's picture

I LOVE this one.
I really do