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Sin
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Maybe I could wear
you like a sin
Clasp on a necklace of
dreams
a fleeting thought…
My lips drip
and for what
I only know chaos
and my heart is
like a spider…
closing up
beneath your flame.
In twelve short lines, you
In twelve short lines, you present two very powerful similes that make this brief poem very, very effective. I read lines 6-12 a couple of times before writing this comment, because the image is both so original and so striking upon the reader.
Starward
Breathtaking, written as
Breathtaking, written as though a page from your personnal diary for a secret love. Thank you for posting and sharing.