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I wear you like a sin
like a necklace of cruel thoughts
I finally found my place in the world, darling
on the streets of
which you walk
scattered fragments
Van Gogh's stars
the hazy dream you have forgotten
I could tell you all about this heartbreak
how I carried it around like an inhaler
how I clung to it like a crutch
I could tell you what your love was like
over a cup of coffee that I only
halfway drink and let go cold
not wanting it anymore
darling,
I just did.
oh! these line sgave me
oh! these line sgave me shivers:
"I could tell you all about this heartbreak
how I carried it around like an inhaler"
Much Love
Ashley
I don't have sufficient words
I don't have sufficient words to praise this poem the way it deserves.
J-Called
Your endings are always
Your endings are always perfect!! I agree this poem is breathless...especially the line about the inhaler
Let your teeth show
Thank you very much :)
Thank you very much :) haven't seen you in awhile! Love the pic!
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Let your teeth show
your
poetry leaves me
breathless
I don't know what to write or say
I am breathless
a dangerous
place
for me to be
i need to catch my breath
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
As always, you make me feel
As always, you make me feel honored and so happy that you read my poems. I've missed you! I hope you are well :)
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
Love The Images
They are so well imagined and lain forth like notes in a sonata that says farewell - enjoyed - Stella -